Overall, for most of the paper I used direct quotation and analysis for this paper. In the future I would like to try and use more paraphrasing and summary for I feel they are much more informative than a long quote that can cause a loss in interest. In this essay I did a much better job of introducing the person and work that I am quoting, for example on the second page I introduced Henig and her work by writing, “According to Robin Marantz Henig, author of “What is it about 20-somethings?,” I did this so that I would be able to then introduce her source in her own paper which she paraphrased what sociologists said about milestones for 20-somethings. I attempted to improve my analysis in my essays, much of the time in the past I feel as if the quotes speak for themselves even though it is necessary for me to explain how this proves the point of my essay. Right below the quote I used above, I failed to explain the quote that I had put so much effort into introducing the way I wanted. I know that I still need to do a better job of this or else it will be useless.
